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  • #992
    mattiejas
    Keymaster

    Let’s start with listing some issues:

    • (quoting snack) “looks like a hippie with tribals in her hair”: perhaps it has this impression from a distance if you don’t look closely enough (I never saw it that way and it is certainly not intended!!) but in any case this is very easy to fix, so I suggest we make the highlights in the hair less light
    • (quoting snack) “… a feather tatooed on her shoulder”: it’s actually intended to be a wing, not a feather – not sure how those lines look like a feather but again maybe it looks that way from a distance? Suggestions for improving the tattoo most welcome.
    • (quoting snack) “the font looks wrong too”: can’t say much here as snack doesn’t say what’s wrong; it’s a really huge effort to do letters, so if we cannot find a good font then I’d consider removing the text or even remove the banner altogether (less is more)
    • Personally I’m still not entirely happy with the hair band. Suggestions for making it more halo like (as in the original) are most welcome!

    Please list your own issues in this thread, but please also accompany these with suggested fixes and concept art. I’ll be back next week to pick up the work on the design.

    #997
    mattiejas
    Keymaster

    I’ve had the good fortune to sit down with a professional painter on my travels, who gave me various tips. So here it goes:

    View post on imgur.com

    • “tribals” fixed
    • tattoo should now look a lot more like a wing
    • hair band removed (it looks better without – trying to add a halo failed on all attempts so we gave up in the end)
    • fixes in the neck
    • more natural hair flow
    • impression of right shoulder added
    • banner flaps removed – this looks better too, they caused incorrect perspective (fixable) and detract attention away from the main feature
    • banner now darker, again to aid contrast against the main feature

    Does everybody agree that this edit looks better?

    I plan to work now on a colour version.

    #998
    jeffrey
    Participant

    Not bad.. I like it!

    #1000
    mattiejas
    Keymaster

    Thanks for the quick feedback, Jeffrey! Here are the colour versions, one with band and one without band:

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    #1001
    mattiejas
    Keymaster

    I’ve now set the coloured version with hairband as crew logo for now just to get a feel of how it looks in-game. If anyone wants to try any of the other versions for a bit, give a shout!

    #1002
    mattiejas
    Keymaster

    Here’s an attempt at improving the banner:

    View post on imgur.com

    I’ve made this the new crew emblem for now.

    #1004
    _Kassz_
    Participant

    http://rsg.ms/49876fa

    Hello not to keep the logo B/W and the just to put the color in eyes and banner

    The face is more stretched out where it is an impression the other look is more attractive it is only my opinion

    I did not manage to put of the color in eyes but here is one can the idea keep(guard) the black and the white but added one little color

    #1006
    mattiejas
    Keymaster

    Thanks so much kassz for the feedback! Here’s kassz’s version on imgur:

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    Here’s my interpretation of it (I’ve kept the hairband, easy to remove of course):

    View post on imgur.com

    #1007
    mattiejas
    Keymaster

    … and for further comparison, a pure b/w version of the logo with improved banner and halo:

    View post on imgur.com

    #1008
    mattiejas
    Keymaster

    Another one (by kassz, with some minor fixes by myself):

    View post on imgur.com

    #1060
    mattiejas
    Keymaster

    I’d like to bring this to a vote fairly soon – any final comments and/or suggestions?

    #1068
    _Kassz_
    Participant

    I believe that yours logo is completed Mattiejas
    The modifications which I brought were that a personal opinion and thanks you for your work

    #1080
    mattiejas
    Keymaster

    Many thanks kassz for the comment.

    It’s been 3 weeks, leaving more than enough time for everyone to have had their say. I will now set up the procedure so the voting can commence later today.

    #1082
    SnackitWH
    Participant

    Is it possible to set two or three Crew logos active? That would be awesome! You know, to set a different Crew logo which fits the style of the car or wahtever logo you like. But its not possible, I guess?

    #1083
    mattiejas
    Keymaster

    Yeah that would be very nice, but sadly rockstar does not have the option to have multiple active logos. šŸ™

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